Tuesday, October 27, 2009

The Package

Alex, lay out the beats we have so far...

Everyone help blog out the rest of the story.

1 comment:

  1. Here are the beats

    -Buscemi enters, flustered w/pkg
    -Asks Terry to hold it until close - refused
    -Offers bribe - refused again
    -Buscemi leaves pkg and $, exits
    -Terry distracted by pkg
    -Terry goes to open pkg, startled by patron
    -Terry keeps open later than normal, waiting for Buscemi
    -Closing up bar, in walks Walken
    -Asks for pkg, Terry denies
    -Asks what's in safe. What safe? Behind moose head
    -Opens safe, reveals chump change
    -Walken gives Terry a min to remember where pkg is. Goes out to get a 'smoke'
    -Returns w/two goons and Buscemi's corpse
    -Throw Buscemi on bar

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